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Feferiby *Shi-RC

Fan Art / Cartoons & Comics / Digital / Books & Novels

I need to practice anatomy again.

A requested character from my variety project. Fan art of Feferi Peixes from Homestuck.

Edit 10/11/2012: Fixed hand, ankle and triton in the line art.
Edit 13/11/2012: Added colours. ♓ is hard to handwrite.

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November 2012.

Homestuck © Andrew Hussie.

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~cafechan Nov 12, 2012 Student General Artist

what an absolute cutie!!! i love her face shape, the flowy hair, and the perspective on the trident ;v;

*Shi-RC Nov 12, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Thank you.

~VenomousJello Nov 9, 2012

AAAAA You draw a really cute Fef!! She looks nice in your styleeeeeeeftyfyvy

In terms of critique UMM I guess her trident looks really two dimensional? If that makes sense! You made it too squarish. It'd look less awkward if you rounded the edges a bit more, maybe even make the lines thinner. Also I think you made the part of the trident closest to the viewer a tad too thick. And from what I can see of her hand on the trident it almost looks like her hands and fingers are much too big for her, but I'm not sure if you just prefer to draw hands like that ~~or if rockman syndrome has taken over~~. Other than that I think her anatomy looks really good! You did a great job with keeping her head proportional to her body, and her hair looks nice and flowy uvu

*Shi-RC Nov 9, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Thank you! Feferi is actually one of my favourite trolls so far (and obviously Nepeta too).

I guess the trident is too flat, I have a hard time putting depth in pole-like objects. I'll try the rounding idea, and thin the line art on the far perspective end.

~~Lmao, Rockman syndrome? This is Sonic syndrome. : P~~ But yes, I do like to draw hands bigger than they're supposed to be. It does look a bit odd though? Here's a version with the sketch in view: [link] The pink hand sketch I only added just now, I can see how it looks too big, her hand is misaligned and a bit manly (feminine hands is something I need to work on). That isn't the position I intended the hand to be, but that's just how it looks. So apparently I need to fix it, LOL.

I'm glad you like the head, I had to resize it a bit cos I actually did draw it too big. The hair was fun. \o/

~VenomousJello Nov 9, 2012

You're welcome! And awesome, I like Feferi a lot too (':

Yeah, putting depth into pole like things can be tough, rounding it will definitely help a bit though

~~LMAO ROCKMAN AND SONIC SYNDROME~~ Oh yeah yeah, the positioning of her hand looks like it makes sense though! You just gotta thin her fingers a bit and it'll look less awkward.

I re-size my heads a lot too when I draw cuz I'm ALWAYYSSS drawing them way too big, so I know how that is. But yeah, you did a good job with it uvu You always draw hair really well hehe.

*Shi-RC Nov 9, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I updated the picture. Is it any better?

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